|Reviews for Acceptance|
| Lurid Black 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Sweet rhymes (matched perfectly), great structure with it, though I would change the number of syllables in each line.
But thats just me, great work, keep at it ]
| Matthew James Current 1/21/08 . chapter 1
A soft-spoken and lovely piece that inspired me to write Entertwined, a darker interpretation of what love can be like sometimes.
It's a sweet, short, simple piece that describes how you feel quite well. Keep on writing and developing your voice my dear friend.