I would talk about the professional air you've put around it, and the smooth flow of just the right terms, and well-crafted scheme.

But that isn't what attracts AND detracts me from this. It always drove me nuts when you wrote these kinds of poems -- I can relate to the point that I think you're in my head >.

This leaves me wondering who has left your life that was important enough to cause such an emotional impact. Whether it is for me to know or not, I hope that it all plays out for the best.