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| WasteASmileOnMe 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseSo, im not normally one to go read something with the intent to actually review, which is sort of selfish now that i think about it since i am a writer.. anyway, this story is... amazing. i loved it. |
| Candyfloss Victim 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abusedammit! why does this have to be a one shot, it would make a really good story. you made me feel sorry for the girl, nikki, and made me hate the guy! which is what a good writer does, well done. |
| Taeryn 2007-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was sweet, in a way I guess. But it was sad... |
| LoveMySoul 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. I may sound stupid for saying this but I could almost feel her pain. I love it when a story can do something like that to me. It means that the author is doing something right. I applaud you. |
| RockMusicFreak 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Although the song had nothing to do with this story, it would fit really well. |
| verita 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI love your descriptions of characters. I really felt like I could see Charlie's mom. And I love that Nikki refused to make small talk with him... at least if she can't get over him, she doesn't have to be polite. I love the whole damn thing. :) And even if it has nothing to do with the song or the band, I love both, and the title is fitting considering what the song is about. My real-life Misery Business story is that of the girl who's singing. Of course it didn't end well and turned into my version of Over You, lol, but yes, you get the picture. |