this is really beautiful.
I love the honesty in this.

"you wear me yellow at your throat".

there are very few poems capable of reducing me to a gibbering wreck, unable to formulate a simple review of deservèd praise. i commend it utterly. thank ye.

This blew me away. It's almost pessimistic, but then it's also kind of like you've got the secret of life. Like you know everything, and that makes it okay.

"some of us are living, all of us are dying"

love.

"some of us are living. all of us are dying."

that line put you on my favs. automatically.

this piece is very spcial. and i agree with the fact that just a few of us are living and all of us are dying.

i like how many layers this has. mhm. pretty, and breakable. you have a mood, altely.