Reviews for Weapons of Element

Reviews For: Weapons of Element

L3G3nD 2008-04-20 ch 8,	abuseAww, the two friends argued...But they way they came into an argument, it was...hehe! Short and simple, good enough! Happy writing!
L3G3nD 2008-04-20 ch 6,	abuseSorry for the long overdue, but good work, you've been improving XD I like the part which Keersi mentions... [You need to keep your girlfriend away from the computers. She’s more of a threat to our network then all the Lighten hackers put together] Haha! Anyway, happy writing!
Willowleaf 2008-03-13 ch 9,	abuseSorry I haven't reviewed, between all the homework my teachers have suddenly decided to pile on my class, play practice, tennis practice, and the fact that I'm the world's biggest procrastinator, I haven't gotten to review. Anyway, enough excuses. It was a good chapter, and long. It'll be interesting to see how it actually works out that they join the Darklings, they're not off to a very good start, are they?
Xire 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseOh, very entreating. Especially that last line.
Fiction King 2008-03-07 ch 9,	abuseHmm Have they just been captured by there own side. Darklings fighting Darklings? Could i get an explenation here. We are going to need a score card for this one.
Fiction King 2008-02-23 ch 8,	abusevery good and very good. (he he very short) I just do them both at once. Continue with the wonderful chapters. Someone has anger management issues huh? :)
Willowleaf 2008-02-09 ch 6,	abuseOoh, the random locking and unlocking doors have potential. A great chapter, albeit a little short. Keep it up!
Fiction King 2008-02-04 ch 6,	abuseOnce again Vippy G has perfectly blended the age of castles with computers creating a story atmosphere like no other. The tension keeps rising in this absolutely amazing story.
Confederation and Oblivion 2008-02-02 ch 6,	abusenice story, i like the base of the story, can you clear it up abit? its either 'cause im half asleep and properly missed 3 lines per page without knowning. as in whats the lightens? Please finish it, i would like to see what happens.
Willowleaf 2007-11-13 ch 5,	abuseThis is good so far. All I have to say is that I have an anouncement: I hate when it rains. Keep up the good work!
Fiction King 2007-10-22 ch 5,	abuseI just can't belive how good this amazing story it will be when it is finished. I just hope it is finished soon. The anticipation is killing me.(Not literaly sorry vippy g)
L3G3nD 2007-10-22 ch 5,	abuselol, juz how funny the girls argued. “Okay, my announcement is…I hate it when it rains.” Gosh, lol pure ownage. I love the part which you described the reactions of her four friends. But they looked somehow choppy. (as in 4 sentences began with a noun and having the same style) That's what I feel though. Hmm the cliffhanger you mean is the part they met the ten smirking figures?
L3G3nD 2007-10-19 ch 4,	abuseI have a serious question to ask. Chapter 1-3, the date was 19th of August 2054, stated clearly. And I thought there were at least a time lapse of few years between c1 to c3, or it looked that way to me. I'll give further review when I had the answer. Sorry this might sounds selfish, but without that I guess I couldn't form a proper review...
Nami 2007-10-17 ch 2, anon.	abuseIt's a very short, quick chapter but it kinda gives us alot. I'd reccomend brushing up on your detail though. What does Megan see, feel? shrug Oh-and please get on MSN. I need to speak to you.

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