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smile for the sunshine 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abusei like the analogy. beautiful piece, truly. i think that it could have been a little longer because i think more detail would strengthen this piece. but it was wonderful. ps. here with the review marathon. click the link on my profile if you're interested.
Pheniox20 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseThis kind of sounds like a song, I like that. It could use some capitalization (i should be I and new tiers should be capitalized), but otherwise very nice.