|Reviews for a realization approaching november|
| kelsi bones 10/19/07 . chapter 1
I like this style though. It works well with what you're trying to say (i think :P). Good work ]
| perdita's kiss 10/18/07 . chapter 1
| Moondog Dozier 10/17/07 . chapter 1
I like the speed, rush, and jolt of this. It exemplifies electricity in that the progression is constant and immediate. Very fluid and thought conscious pace. Well written work. MD:77.
| evm 10/17/07 . chapter 1
It's lovely! Sounds like something I would write...ah those linebreaks, they can be quite dreadful when they feel like it.