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a realization approaching november
kelsi bones
2007-10-19 . chapter 1
I like this style though. It works well with what you're trying to say (i think :P). Good work =]
k.X
perdita's kiss
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
love
Moondog Dozier
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
I like the speed, rush, and jolt of this. It exemplifies electricity in that the progression is constant and immediate. Very fluid and thought conscious pace. Well written work. MD:77.
evm
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
It's lovely!! Sounds like something I would write...ah those linebreaks, they can be quite dreadful when they feel like it.
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