| Reviews for a realization approaching november |
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kelsi bones 10/19/07 . chapter 1I like this style though. It works well with what you're trying to say (i think :P). Good work ] k.X |
perdita's kiss 10/18/07 . chapter 1love |
Moondog Dozier 10/17/07 . chapter 1I like the speed, rush, and jolt of this. It exemplifies electricity in that the progression is constant and immediate. Very fluid and thought conscious pace. Well written work. MD:77. |
evm 10/17/07 . chapter 1It's lovely! Sounds like something I would write...ah those linebreaks, they can be quite dreadful when they feel like it. |