very nice, sounds like song lyrics, very much like song lyrics

Fantastic poem.

I think everyone wants to be a princess/prince every once in awhile.

Twilight Starr

nice work

Aww, I loved this song. I think what's good about it is that the girl is trying to make the boy hers so they can live out their lives (to some extent, I guess) as a prince and princess. This reminds me of a typical fairy tale but it is contextualised in the modern world :)