I feel this is as soulful as it can get. It is emotional, passionate, honest and beautiful. In this work, you get a whole painful story in a couple of words, and words are soemtimes not enough. But then again, no one can fully understand until they feel the pain go through their vains and struck them in a blink of a shock.

Aamazing work! Keep up!:]

I felt the sadness through this piece. I can only imagine something like that happen to me, if I had my girlfirend do this to me. If this is a real event then I'm sorry for your loss. I really liked the poem and I hope you keep writing.

Maggot.