nooooooooooooooooo keisuke you idiot!no it not the right thing to do! if there is a lemon in the next chapter it better be grant and keisuke or ill be haunting your dreams for the rest of your life and ill hide in your closet with a pitch fork waiting to strike!

keisuke you ass! what a stupid grudge to hold against someone who loves you! you can get raped for all i care!just dont go back to the people who gave you love food and family!go back once you truely realize your grant did has been eating at his insides sinse it the same thing happened to me i would forgive no point in making the persons life a place worse than hell!...wow i spazed out...

Awesome story. I love it!

But I have one question: Why does Cian sleep around like that if he seems like he doesn't really like that?

so, its an old posting, but its a really good story. thanks for sharing!

Thank you very much for the wonderful story!

I hope you can write a sequel about this story.

BTW I hope that you keep up the good work

And thank you very much again for the story!

I really loved your story!

I loved your story.

It felt like the plot went kind of fast though.

I got a bit confused.

Other then that it was awsome!

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i liked the story and of course the characters besides the few misspelled words...

This is one of the best stories i have evr red! I can't wait to start reading halloween candy! I am DEFINATELY putting you on my alert list!

I loved the whole thing, you can't spell, but you make one hell'ova good author! ;3

I would love a story with any of our male characters. I love them all. I would like to know more about Jarl (did I spell his name right :s) , you the oldest character. But I also wouldn't mind more Grant and Keisuke. I love your characters so anyone would be great.

Pretty good keep up the good work.

hi

I loved your story! Just finished it now! I wish it could go on longer. I was sorta freaked out by the fat guy rape...you made it so relistic that even I started to cry! I cant help but thinking that everything happened a little too fast. I would have been happier Keiske had something else that was specila about him. Something he did to make him cool! A special trait, or a secret he has that he cant share to anyone. Things like that. And I also wish there was a little more info about Grants little bro..

All in all, it was awesome! XD Cant wait for you to write more!

I can't believe this will be my final review for Nymph - why does that seem unfair. Overall this was an enjoyable story with just the right amount of flair to keep the reader wanting to read more. The characters were likeable (except for the bad guys) and the romance developed nicely too.

I'm glad that you'll be writing one shots about Grant and Keisuke - after all I wana see what happens.

I know you think the ending was nostalgic but I think it was a perfect way to finish up.