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| king of confidence 2008-04-01 ch 1,  | abuseI think it's interesting how you're playing on gender stereotypes for your humour/sarcasm(?). The only thing that tripped me up was the line about being "the gay"--I wasn't quite sure what to make of that. Were you intentionally being derogatory, in order to make the guy seem more mean? |
| Monkeydo 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abusenice! as a current guy-hating ex it's perfect |
| softer side of apples 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS POEM... |
| deannanic63 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseI love how accurate and true this is...I feel like I can really relate to it and that's quite an accomplishment :) Good job once again. ~Deanna |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was so true! We all wish it could be different when sucky things happen. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| Andrea Lotte 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Burn! You've definitely struck a chord for me, and I bet for all those other girls when they read this. I like I like :-) Great work! |
| Froggiemiks 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseLove it. It imspires me. Lol. I think all girls have or do currently feel this way. Nice |
| theThinker 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is really funny! However i will say that any guy who does these things to a girl...should have had his man card revoked, and if he hadnt then the man council is slacking and ill have to put in a complaint. No guy should ever treat a woman like that. Sorry if a guy has treated you like that. -theThinker- THINK! Think about what? I DONT CARE JUST THINK NOW! |
| Luny Loona 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseYup, difference in genders can be annoying... Nice poem and structure, I like the shorter stanzas within the longer ones. |
| lover-and-fighter 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusei love it...its amazing. and yea...guys stinkk. they get the easy end of the stick |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusehaHA! yess! love this! it's so true too! i wish the guys could learn what it feels like. anywhoo, thanks for reviewing to my stuff! much luff xoxo and all that jazz Velvet |