|Reviews for Synthesis of Hyacinths and Loss|
| Crafty Butcher 12/7/07 . chapter 1
lovely. i woulda had the title without "and loss", but awesome all around.
| Needa S 11/13/07 . chapter 1
Great rhymes! Awesome job! Write on and God Bless.
| review 10/26/07 . chapter 1
unlike my "poems," yours are short, sweet, and to the point.
VERY to the point, it seems.
"Do we kiss the ones we love profusely?
Or do we realize now they're out of touch?"
im guessing you like to put things exactly as you perceive them. but good rhyme scheme: the best rhyme scheme is one that you don't notice too much, one that doesn't take away from the meaning behind the words.
and guess what. you're almost at perfection. ;D