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| fleur de l'est 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseI like the almost morbid feel to your poems, it's like having a thick layer of dust on my nose. It's suffocating, but addictive. (Don't know how you do it, but it's great!!) |
| Walrus Lover 2.0 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseAre you making fun of Cancer Kids? Mean! -Wally |
| Lady Fingers 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseoh my! phew i need to catch my breath this was incredibly relatable and beautifully written (and so i find every one of your poems i have clicked on has yet to dissappoint.) You are really talented I wish you were in my creative writing class, we'd have so much to talk about-or so it feels... |
| XsilentXescapeX 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseamazing and...pretty? i guess you could say that. I love the title and summary. Lovely. |
| miscellanea 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat a Pretty Necklace...wow. This is really good. |
| DiaRose 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful, and original, I'm very impressed. Love, ~Dia |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abusethank you for the review :) i adore this. every stanza. i like the honey metaphor in the beginning the most, mostly because i feel like that everytime i try to speak. |
| windy girl 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseThis all flows really nicely. The end was particularly pretty. -pb |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI always want to give you constructive criticism, but I can never find anything to criticize. I really loved the last lines how they rhymed somewhat. |
| Jessie 2007-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat last stanza is amazing. |
| the face in the window 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseAnother amazing poem (so goes all my reviews). I love the second stanza, beautiful. Rowan. (p.s. *pokes* I posted things on this account, the wait's finally over. xD) |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThis had great flow and a morbid taste to it, but I can't quite put my finger on what sounded so morbid about it. The third to last stanza was incredible especially "Cut me up do I will bleed for calling you an almost liar". Really good poetry, though I didn't grasp it fully I liked not understanding it. It gives me more reason to think upon it and anything thought-provoking is good. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| painted.music 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusekonban wa Those last two lines... breathtaking! I -- wow! Wow! Wow! "ALl I can think is that cancer is strung across your mother's neck / But it's choking you instead" -- LOVED THOSE LINES!! (Sorry, this review was almost pathetic in how unhelpful it was.) Zaijen -Shan- |