|Reviews for What A Pretty Necklace|
| wo bu ai ni le 6/6/08 . chapter 1
I like the almost morbid feel to your poems, it's like having a thick layer of dust on my nose. It's suffocating, but addictive.
(Don't know how you do it, but it's great!)
| Walrus Lover 2.0 3/24/08 . chapter 1
Are you making fun of Cancer Kids? Mean!
| Lady Fingers 3/12/08 . chapter 1
i need to catch my breath
this was incredibly relatable and beautifully written (and so i find every one of your poems i have clicked on has yet to dissappoint.)
You are really talented
I wish you were in my creative writing class, we'd have so much to talk about-or so it feels...
| XsilentXescapeX 11/22/07 . chapter 1
amazing and...pretty? i guess you could say that. I love the title and summary. Lovely.
| miscellanea 11/9/07 . chapter 1
What a Pretty Necklace...wow. This is really good.
| DiaRose 10/26/07 . chapter 1
Very beautiful, and original, I'm very impressed.
| whispered something profound 10/22/07 . chapter 1
thank you for the review :)
i adore this. every stanza. i like the honey metaphor in the beginning the most, mostly because i feel like that everytime i try to speak.
| windy girl 10/20/07 . chapter 1
This all flows really nicely. The end was particularly pretty.
| Stella Grimshaw 10/20/07 . chapter 1
I always want to give you constructive criticism, but I can never find anything to criticize. I really loved the last lines how they rhymed somewhat.
| Jessie 10/20/07 . chapter 1
That last stanza is amazing.
| the face in the window 10/18/07 . chapter 1
Another amazing poem (so goes all my reviews). I love the second stanza, beautiful.
(p.s. *pokes* I posted things on this account, the wait's finally over. xD)
| the Stranger in the moonlight 10/18/07 . chapter 1
This had great flow and a morbid taste to it, but I can't quite put my finger on what sounded so morbid about it. The third to last stanza was incredible especially "Cut me up do I will bleed for calling you an almost liar".
Really good poetry, though I didn't grasp it fully I liked not understanding it. It gives me more reason to think upon it and anything thought-provoking is good.
the Stranger in the moonlight
| half-sketched.staccatos 10/18/07 . chapter 1
Those last two lines... breathtaking! I - wow! Wow! Wow! "ALl I can think is that cancer is strung across your mother's neck / But it's choking you instead" - LOVED THOSE LINES!
(Sorry, this review was almost pathetic in how unhelpful it was.)