It's nice to see you posting again on FP. :)

As always your descriptions create such vivid imagery and really make your poems come alive. I quite the power behind the last lines too. Take care.

I like how this eludes to historical situations with a modern flare. The tone enhances the evident feelings well. The reader can follow the progression because it stays true to the central theme and elaborates on it in unique ways. Well written. MD:77.