Reviews for treetops of imaginary forests

Reviews For: treetops of imaginary forests

RuchiraMandal 2008-01-16 ch 1,	abuseI can relate. I felt like I read myself. And I loved the blackhole metaphor. I used a black hole symbolism in one of my poems, but it was as an idea, you know, lack of communication. Anyway, good work.
fictitious facades 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abusei love the parts in parentheses. they're like afterthoughts. i don't know if it was your meaning but the last part really caught me with how there's this guy and i like him and he does things that make me think he likes me but i'm never really sure.
IdeasInTheAir 2007-10-23 ch 1,	abuseCool, it kind of reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's poems, kind of the angst stuff, going mad, that kind of thing. But with a Rowan twist. Hey, that could be a drink! Rowan Twist.=) It will be off the shelves when you're famous! Yes, enough of that. I think my favourtie part was the "I’m under the treetops of imaginary forests waiting for you to come rescue me." part, becuase it really decribes how the person is trapped in their own mind and can't get out. But that part I loved, because I could REALLY picture it. Maybe I'll go sketch it. Nah, I'm a bad drawer. I'm very glad you can post again, and I'm sorry it took so long for me to review this. Now I must attend to the Socail Studies. Oh, and congradulations with the TURNING OF NEW PAGES. I think it was at a good time. =) ~Danielle=)
Daiysis 2007-10-22 ch 1,	abuseOMGosh! I love this part: "See, when I see you it’s alright ‘cause I can pretend someone will be there to take me home (one can always hope)." For some reason, it reminds me of something I'd say. Also, in the beginning, I was smiling and then I read the second line that said "taunting me with your smile" and I went ahead and screamed because it's like you were predicting my every thought and action. Anywho, wonderful piece for a new beginning! I actually went ahead and added you to my author alert list when I found about your new account (I had to do it manually because you didn't have any stories at the time). But I'm sorry I didn't review you earlier, I was denied Internet access all weekend. =( But you can always count on me for a review, you deserve them all anyways, thats for sure. Ok, well I have Spanish online to tend to... I'll read and review your other piece in a few hours, ok? bye! and thanks for the review! lol
perpetual questions 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseHappy fresh start! Glad to be reading you again. And now I can add you to my favourites. It sounds like a descent into madness poem. Which I have to love. I like the formatting, especially in the last two lines.
Ashelin 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abuseYay! Let's bring out the sparkling cider and congratulate and celebrate your "first" poem! Haha. Really, wonderful job. I loved the last part. I'm just happy to see you posting again!

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