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Sixpence Fortune 2008-07-24 ch 67,	abuseHoly...that was...AWESOME! I stayed up all night reading this story, and I have to tell you...you are one of the most talented writers ever.
ahhhh 2008-07-17 ch 67, anon.	abuseI finished reading it for the second time...and I still think its awesome, awesome, awesome! Have you published this story already?? Cuz I would love to get my hands on a copy...and if you haven't published it, you seriously should!! Its one of the best stories (series) I've read!! Wow...the story is in fact pretty deep; and I am completely in love with Maya and Jace (great job on characterization). You should definitely win in SKOW for the best MC portrayal! So yeah...there ends my rant about how awesome you are! ooh...but I do have one little question: Why is Tray suddenly at the encampment where he kills Lily? I thought that was a little random and major use of plot manipulation.
Elfish Suicide 2008-07-16 ch 67,	abusethis is just epic. I .. you need to get this published. This could honestly be up there with Jane eyre and Pride and Prejudice. This could really be the greatest book written, easy. You just inspire me. honestly.
Norel 2008-07-16 ch 67,	abuseOh. My. Gosh. Do you know how many hours I've logged reading this?! There were so many other things I could have been doing instead, but I sat here and read this for DAYS! But it was worth it. There was so much in this story-I'll probably have to re-read it again just to understand everything. The scene where Jace was fighting the other Panther (Merit, was it?) was probably my favorite, and the fart jokes that he made were also pretty funny (and a very typical guy thing to do). I'm not entirely sure what else to say; the story kinda took a big turn at the end and dove into the spiritual world, which I guess I should have scene coming. This was really different than A Whole New Crowd, but they were both really amazing. This is one of the stories That I'm going to have to read again to fully understand what was happening. The only I thing that I would have liked you to change would be to add more physical character description, specifically to Maya. It wasn't until half way into the story when I got a general idea of what she looked like. And on a semi related note, what happened to A Whole New Crowd being published? I tried to look for it on that website but it wasn't there anymore.
loveables 2008-07-14 ch 67,	abuseI LUV this story..i read A Whole New Crowd nd i also luvd it..but i expectd this to be great nd it was soo much more. it realli tuchd me nd im soo had my wheels turning so amny surprises..im happi about the ending nd cant wait to read the third series.two thumbs up
ahhhhh 2008-07-10 ch 67, anon.	abuseTotally Awesome story! Oh my God, its just so well written, and I love the characters (I LOVE JACE!), and I love the plot, and I love all the confusion and the emotion and its just amazing! Needless to say, I LOVED IT!! There are little bits and pieces that I don't understand but I'm sure that I'll get it when I reread this. Good job! You're definitely one of my fave authors!!
dramaqueen89 2008-07-10 ch 67, anon.	abuseFunny thing was. I had a hunch that Tray was Sal's son. The minute he called Tray "son". And the minute he said it was "family business". Haha. Cool.
dramaqueen89 2008-07-10 ch 67, anon.	abuseWow. ** update the next story.
dramaqueen89 2008-07-09 ch 60, anon.	abuseKnew it. Knew Lily was the smokescreen the minute the DEA safehouse was ambushed. **.
dramaqueen89 2008-07-08 ch 17, anon.	abuseJace is funny.
dramaqueen89 2008-07-08 ch 12, anon.	abuseDammit all. Jace is freaking hot. He's my fave. Sad to say. I have a thing for untamed bad boys. And he's definitely lethal.
Miss Secret 2008-07-08 ch 67,	abuseThat. Was. . Incredible. Seriously! This is so effing amazing! The plot is so intricate, well-planned, and well-organized down to a TEE! It blows my mind away! You got me hooked on this story so badly that it's 5:30 in the MORNING right now! Seriously. This is so much better than A Whole New Crowd. Well, actually, I'm not sure. It was a while ago when I read that. But I love this story a whole lot more. I really do appreciate all the effort that you put into this! There are things that irk me about this, though. The writing lacks description. Important ones that a reader should know in order to get though the story smoothly. Like the time of something, exactly where they're at (like, what state in Pedlam and Rawley located at?). Sometimes, you just skip over some of those details as if you're expecting us to know what's happening. Or maybe that's just me because I got so confused while reading this. But this is still so incredible. I'm glad I decided to read this story (I wasn't about to just because I read AWNC and I didn't want anything to spoil my views about it and because it's so long!) but I did. I'm REALLY glad I did! Sure, there were some things that I was able to infer but there were plenty of twists that surprised me. Thanks for the awesome read! I really enjoyed it! I though Jace Lanser was hot before but now...he's indescribable. I was a bit iffy with Maya at first but she grew on me. haha. I like how she's not as self-righteous as Taryn is. You know what I really love about this story? How you did with a brand new character's point of view and made it really work. And back to the whole intricate plot thing! It's so mind-blowing how every little thing is connected! How you connected the first one to this one. How Sal never killed Tray because he was his son..who would've thunk?! I have so much to say but it's all babble. All stuff that I just like mentioning but don't have the time. Just know that this is a ** great story. It's not the typical romance story as you've classified under. Or supernatural. It's so much more! I'm sure that after some (major) editing and revising and cutting, you could get this published (not self-published). I would so buy it. This is the kind of stuff that people like. Great stuff.
Miss Secret 2008-07-08 ch 63,	abusethat is some FREAKY **. now i know why it's supernatural!
Miss Secret 2008-07-08 ch 60,	abusewow, i was thinking that it was lily like chapters ago! i think when the smokescreen was first mentioned, i thought it had to be someone unexpected. at that point, i thought it'd either be chance or lily. but the chance theory died a bit--it just became lily. but yeah. nice connections!
Miss Secret 2008-07-08 ch 54,	abusewait...if tray and chance aren't blood related, how are they even half brothers? cause if they don't have the same mom or the same dad..how did they become to live under the same parents? and how would they have similar physical features?

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