 Gentle. Edge. 2009-10-04 . chapter 67I really liked your story, it was so interesting and different. The relgious/angel/demons aspect confused me a bit and so did some part of the plan but I still really enjoyed it. Your story was really different from anything else I've read and I adored your characters. Great job :D |
 Reverie-enchantee 2009-09-27 . chapter 67Hi Tijan,
I was so impatient to have the time to read the last chapters. I enjoyed this story from the beginning to the end. Lots of questions whose answers come sometimes at the very end (how frustating sometimes it was! ^_^). I especially like the mind game between the two of them enfolding, turning into a quest of trust and faith, and then just love, the supernatural dimension. I think their spirit met, how everything is linked. There were times when I was furious, really thinking they both lost their sentiments so I am quite happy the way you ended this story, that you sticked to it ^_^. Jace's child was a great surprise, along with the way Jace melted down, I did not picture it this way. I have the feeling she brought him back. I long doubted the "happy" ending so I really like reading this promising ending that opens to lots of doors. Thank you for having shared such a story. |
 Gentle. Edge. 2009-09-19 . chapter 1I was really confused in the beginning but as I kept reading, I understood it better. I think it was mostly because I got the characters confused since I read New Crowd so long ago. Anyways, you did a really awesome job even though Maya still confuses me a bit :P But yeah.. great job :) |
 Hana 2009-08-28 . chapter 1 I absolutly love this story!After I finshed it I read it all over again.Its really addicting.Jace and Maya are amazing, there defintly my fav couple.I can't wait see more of them in the thrid one! |
 strange days 2009-08-09 . chapter 67I have to honestly say that this is the most incredible, deep, real story I have ever read on FP. It's amazing the work you've put into it! I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
I have to say, though, it took a while to figure out how AWNC ended, because a huge block of it is taken down. Not a problem, though.
You should definitely try to get this published. :) |
 rubberduckysabc 2009-08-07 . chapter 67This is the most amazing story ever. I can't even describe how great it is. I can't wait till the third story! Keep on writing it is your calling. :D |
 Misty 2009-08-01 . chapter 67 You are a genius. Pure and simple. I loved every minute of Jace and Maya's journey together. It was so real.. unlike a lot of stories you read on here. I'm seriously going to miss your them :( |
 MeganVaz 2009-07-24 . chapter 67hi.
i just want to say that sentiment lost is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time. your plot structure is incredible. thanks for making reading your work so enjoyable. |
 exhaustedparanoia 2009-07-18 . chapter 1I read this a year ago but I didnt review because I wasnt a user back then. This story left such a lasting impression on me. You write awesome stories. Sentiment lost is the best among all. It's thought provoking, intelligent,complex, gutsy, action wrapped in one. But most of all, you create fantastic characters. Nevermind its mighty long, there is nothing yawn-inducing with this story.
Love this.
Keep on writing. |
 HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC 2009-07-14 . chapter 67Tijan.!.
May i just say that you my dear are an AMAZING authoress.!.
You have every right to be proud of this story because you know what.?. Its fan-fricken-tastic.!.
I have to be honest the first 15 chaps put me off a bit but once i got past them i finished the story within a week.!.
Be proud of yourself and of your story, you have proven yourself to be a very versatile writer.!. |
 windlessnight 2009-07-11 . chapter 66 hey i just want to say that you are a very good writer. your stories are more to reality and that is something i dont cross by everyday . i just hope that you will keep writting here.
best wish from me |
 tsudonim 2009-07-02 . chapter 67 Oh my god. This was an amazing story. I loved reading every second of this. I actually finished this yesterday, and would've review after I was done but it was already 6 a.m.! I was so into this story, and the fact that Maya I and share the same name is a plus! You are an spectacular author. When it comes to Sentiment Lost, I was skeptical about reading it because of the enormous size, but, I'm glad I did. I love all of your stories. I can't wait for Gray's story! I hope one day, I'll be able to see your books on a bookshelf at the local Barns & Noble! You are simply amazing. |
 Defying Destinyy 2009-07-01 . chapter 67I wanted to read this story a long time ago after I finished A Whole New Crowd, but the 67 chapter intimidated me and I chose not to read it. I started reading this a day and a half ago, I didn't check how many chapters there were. By the time I realized how long it was I was too into the story to stop.
I'm not saying this to suck up, I'm saying this because this is true, you have some major talent and insight, and knowing that people like you exist in this world is so inspirational. Ever since I started this story I haven't been able to stop thinking about what kind of person you are in real life. That kinda sounds a bit creepy, but really there are so many deep layers in all of your characters. The entire story has so many deep overlapping themes, messages and ideas going on. It makes me wonder what kind of an amazing person you are.
Most of the stories on here are fluff, and about romance, and although that's fun to read, Sentiment Lost was such a refreshing change. Honestly, Maya kind of reminded me a little bit of myself; just the way she thinks, and I'd be lying if I said that this story hasn't affected me personally. You are an amazing author and I really hope you get this published because I would love to get my hands on this story if it was in hard copy. I wouldn't be surprised if you became a famous author in the future.
Anywho, the writing of the story itself was incredible, you have an amazing style of writing. There were a few minor spelling mistakes, but apart from that I didn't really see anything that really violated the grammar rules. I have to say the supernatural aspect of the story surprised me a bit since I didn't see the tags, but it all fit together so well.
I wish Jace didn't have to suffer as much as he did, but I guess it's what makes him Jace.
I was hoping for a bit more in the epilogue, like a bit more insight on Maya and Jace's life after the funeral. Do you think you'd consider doing a one shot about their lives after everything's calmed down a bit? I truly applaud you for your effort on this, I know how much it must have taken to get this written. Especially since it has such a deeper aspect to it than many of the other stories here. If this was me writing it would have taken me forever, and I would've been completely emotionally drained after it.
This is getting kind of long, but I guess all I really wanted to say was that this story was Amazing. I've completely fallen in love with Jace and Maya's characters. The "realness" of the entire thing kind of gets to you. I guess that's one of the reasons it's so good. I really hope you keep on writing, and I definitely will look forward to whatever you write.
♥
P.S- I loved all the foreshadowing that you did, and all the little hints you dropped. I have to say I'm very proud of myself on picking up a lot of them :] Although I was wrong in guessing who Ambrea was. I thought she was Jace and Maya's future daughter, guess I was wrong. :]Okay. Bye now :] |
 Kawaii Shadow 2009-06-28 . chapter 67i just wanted to say that you are one the most talented writers on fp that i hav ever read. this was one of my fav of all time. i hope you get publish one day. |
 artificial destiny 2009-05-05 . chapter 67wow |