The reader can definently feel the conflicting emotions of the author. That is good quality in poems, I think.

Inspiring poem. Great job!

Twilight Starr

This is my absolute FAV one! great work! keep using all that wonderful talent! :D

This is amazing writing. I have been in a situation like this one before and it took me a long time to give up being his "rag doll". So I hope to see more frome you.

The flow of this is disrupted periodically, but that doesn't always matter. I really like the tone of this. I'm glad you can look at this situation and still feel some strength.

Ok I love this I love all of it, I don't love one line more than the other. It flowed very well and it ended great! Adding To favs!

Kristie marie