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| tori!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =] 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusehey babe! shivers girl that is awesome! it totally enbodies how i feel! lol! it reminds me of poems that i wrote about when i liked that first guy last year! lol! brings back some weird freaky memories! lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol |
| loveYOOinADVANCE 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseLISA!! =] =] YAY! your first poem! =] =] hehehehe im SO excited for you!! keep it up men! cant wait to read more from you! ^^ |
| Smoky Bear 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abusebeing a hardened cynic, i don't normally read love poems but couldn't resist the chance to leave a 1st review, lol... Glad I took a look, it's a nice and thought out poem, i like the delicate and subtle rhyme. Favorite line "I would protect you When we’re in my world" Hope you submit more in the future x |