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tori!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =]
2008-03-31
ch 1, anon.
abusehey babe!

shivers girl that is awesome! it totally enbodies how i feel! lol!

it reminds me of poems that i wrote about when i liked that first guy last year! lol! brings back some weird freaky memories! lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
loveYOOinADVANCE
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseLISA!! =] =]

YAY! your first poem! =] =] hehehehe im SO excited for you!! keep it up men! cant wait to read more from you! ^^
Smoky Bear
2007-10-19
ch 1,
abusebeing a hardened cynic, i don't normally read love poems but couldn't resist the chance to leave a 1st review, lol...

Glad I took a look, it's a nice and thought out poem, i like the delicate and subtle rhyme. Favorite line "I would protect you When we’re in my world"

Hope you submit more in the future x
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