love it! it's seriously really mad good. i think it's my favorite thing you've ever written. no offense, but it's light-years ahead of some of your fanfiction. i mean FANTASTIC.

That was adorable! I like the lazy atmoshere and the way Cam talks. I think it's better that Cam didn't die. If she did, it would just be for shock, but there's kinda a message in it. Or at least a warm feeling. Can't explain what it is.

Oh, that was *great* I loved it! I like how Cam speaks...that casual, grammatically incorrect drawl we all know and secretly love. One thing to look out for: In the beginning, you said 'Nonsense sense.' I don't know if that was purposeful, or if you made a mistake (I don't speak like that, so I don't know)...so I'm just pointing it out.