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| Burnt Bread 2007-10-24 ch 1,  | abuseAh, the underrepresented voice of the wife of a supervillan. I'm really psyched that you're writing one for every topic. ...so a death ray that doesn't deliver death? I like the matter-of-fact tone that the wifey uses. Women are always so rational when it comes to bad things. bread |
| Aislin Kane 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWhen I started this, I didn't really know what to expect, but man I loved the ending. That was great! |
| felicia13 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Nice twist. I do enjoy death-rays that turn people in superheroes. It's almost like reverse-psychology for the evil-minded, except it works every time. I thought he was just going to commit suicide, but I see that it's worse that than. It's villain-cide. ^^ Felicia. |