Nice satire.

Are you kidding? For people with more intelligence, and a mature approach?

Sweetheart, I don't know how old you are to consider this mature, but it needs a lot of work.

I was expecting a more substantial and mature fiction. You said in your summary that 'Vampiric Kiss' is for more readers of more-than-average intellectual ability. I must say that I am a little disappointed.

Is this supposed to be serious? If so, I've ot some stuff to say...

"Beautifuler" isn't a word. Try "More beautiful".

In chapter one, you put some extra words where they didn't belong.

Really...This seems kind of a cliched plot. But I think if you tweaked it a little it'd be awesome.

Ashe

Hmm, very interesting story. I like the detail, but it's a little fast paced. In all, I really like it!

Woah, so Shoko is becoming more confident then - that's good. think she deserves to have the best things in life now after what she went through during the previous chapter.I admit I was kinda surprised that she turned into a vampire and it made me laugh when she said she would be a vegertarian vampire - now that was great.

Well, at least she has changed for the better and she is more beautiful too and I think this new personality suits her down to the ground to be honest. I would like to see what she can do with her new found abilities and see if Jiro gets with her finally sooner or later.

I really like Jiro and I think he is worthy of her as I can tell he truly cares about her and wants to do anything for her. I loved it when he said he will love her and her poetry forever - that was romantic and it shows that he has feelings towards her.

I do hope that she gets her revenge on Bitchoho but before that she needs to control her powers first.

That happened breathtakingly fast...I really like it! Is there any more this is quite upbeat? Please update soon!

I read this the other day and kept forgetting to review. I don't normally read romance stories but this one is pretty good though. It's rather funny an d I hope you'll continue it soon.

This is quite interesting - I enjoyed it to say the least :) I admit this is a rather good idea so I'm looking forward to see how it develops. You described how it feels to be a teenager as teenagers do go through these moods and feelings/emotions that they haven't felt before lol.

Shoko - I feel sorry for her after hearing about the car crash and I personally thinks she should be finally happy and rise above people who bully her. My God, she has a lot of allergies hehe.

Bitcoho - I hate her completely. She is really stuck up and she obviously thinks that the whole world revolves her. I hope something bad happens to her lol.

Jiro - I think he is such a good lad, protecting her like that. And yes, I do think that Jiro and Shoko have a hell of a lot of things in common. They will be a good couple no doubt!

Also. this is very funny too...

o.o It's terrible, yet hilarious. Like when the worst auditions of Idol is on, I find myself unable to look away. I salute you! : P

Very Nice! UPDATE!