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Reviews For: Deep Sleep

posie 2007-10-25 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is beautiful fairey!! such lovely images are conjured up in my mind when i read it! love x
Auraya 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseaw!! this is so amazing! beautiful imagery. I especially love the first line "tears took me far from you tonight-" it instantly made me want to read on. I also loved "the stars rain on me" for in a sence they do. I love "they burn with heaven's jewels" too. Such a beautiful poem. x
Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abusefaerie these are wonderful! i love this: Dancing embers and shallow moons, so pretty! err, today i remembered the lyrics poppy and i thought up when we were ten. the story that goes with: We were at a random pub and there was a balloon man there (in america) and he made me a tortoise and poppy a pig, on our way home,while walking/dancing we came up with a song. Splish Splash i was having a bath when suddenly i heard a crash i went downstairs to see what it was and i saw shelly and she said I'm not smelly! and i saw pinky and she said I'm not stinky. -And do you know WHY kids?- /no why/ Cause splish splash i was having a bath. etc. its a never ending song. i think i may have to put it in my story. ponders youre poems are always so pretty! x p.s. DAMNIT! i did it again. i made something about myself, this must stop. x
PocoSnow15 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abuseSee, these are lyrics I want songs today to have. I can just hear it in my head. Really beautiful, this was very well written.