I was wondering when you're going to update?

Wow! This story is very intriguing especially as a quick one-shot. I loved it. Excellent descriptions of the scene, I felt as if I was really there seeing and feeling everything the girl was feeling/seeing. Thank you for your talent and keep it up!

-Libby

I like the idea. This sounds like it going to be pretty good.

Um... A bit heated, yeah? If that's just the beginning i can't wait for more.