Aww, that was well nice. I felt sorry for James at the start when he caught his gf with another man. It's about time he has someone to love who won't take him for granted :) Well done.

I really liked it alot, but I got kind of confused when you said he was her older brother. As the story progressed though I relized that you were just meaning that he felt like a big brother to Claire. Keep writing :) and good luck