Aw, I love the Bruce/Lola part!! It was so sweet!! And Bailey is Zoe?? How did I miss that in the last chapter!! I absolutely LOVE how this is going!! PLEASE update soon!!

Great first chapter!! :D I really like Bailey so far!! I wonder who she's gonna meet...*taps chin* LOL! I'm really excited to see what'll happen next!! PLEASE update soon!!

WOW! I absolutely LOVED the prologue!! It was AMAZING!! *whoohoo* But, I have to say that I already miss my Lucas!! :( I hope I'll grow to love Jaden as much as I did him! I can't wait to read more, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I really like the fact that you put emotion into what your characters are saying.That is very good for your writing. Please r/r my material at thanks.