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| Desayuna 2008-01-06 ch 5,  | abusethanks for answering my question; i get all warm and fuzzy when people actually take the time to read something i've written. the party-crashing adds a nice spin to the story. |
| Ameme 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusegreat story! |
| Desayuna 2007-11-26 ch 4, | abuseIt was short, but sometimes short is a good thing--it keeps your readers begging for more (hint-hint). Just wondering--why did you pick pink as Ray's eye color? |
| Tomiko90 2007-10-23 ch 3, | abuseOoh! So THEY have the necklace! I liked that we got more information on Luc's family history and abillities. I wonder what they'll do now that he knows who has the necklace! Can't wait for the next chapter :D |
| Desayuna 2007-10-21 ch 3, | abuseThis sounds really good so far. It's interesting, and I like the way you introduced the characters so far. :p yay! |
| Tomiko90 2007-10-21 ch 2, | abuseThis is an awesome story! I can't believe nobody else has commented it!! So now we know Luc has summoning abilities! But what exactly is he?? I guess I'll have to wait and see in the next chapter. And I wonder who has the necklace! :O Update soon :) |
| Tomiko90 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Very interesting so far. I'm really drawn to all the characters. You have very good descriptions. I'm really wanting to know more about that man and Ray. I'll definately add this to my C2! |