I've only read the first chapter so far - its sweet :)

Just one thing; a story called Literal Love Triangle by Onyx Flight Path was put up on FP last year and as far as I can tell its a carbon copy of your story. Just so you know :)

I like how - oh bugger i've forgotten teh MC's name... um... no its gone - oh well, kind of twisted she is, in a hilarious way; she's a loner but she agrees to be in the spotlight, for example. peculiar and hilarious. loved this line: "It was funny… funny but still really hot." that just about summed it up for me! great work :D

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I finished reading this a little while ago, but I thought I'd leave a review for you just to let you know that I thought this was a great, cute little story. :) Although it maybe should be classified as fantasy. :-P

I absolutely love this plot! I am, too, a Yaoi/fangirl and it was delightful to read this story. However, I got one of two constructive critics: First, concerning the story: I would love you if you could expand the story a little bit. The plot and development its actually pretty good, but you could do so much more with it! More interaction between Josh & Matthew, a little more "hotness" around and more action between the characters(why do they love each other?, why they decided to be bi for her?, why does she love them? It's really more than just an obsession with yaoi for her part? For they, it is really love for her, as a persona?) would be extremely well recieved. Secondly, I NEED a sequel. Please, this story has SO much to give. Don't cut it short! I can assure you, you have a loyal reader in me. Anyway, great story, and even if you can't act upon my suggestions, I still love the story! Kudos!

Did you know that there is a writer named Onyx FLight Path with a first chapter exactly the same as yours?
Nice story by the way ^__^

I loved this story, it made me think about whether you act like this which would make me laugh even more or whether you're completely different and you wouldn't like to be in love with two gay guys. Also captured your personality pretty well ;).

This is a wonderful story so far! I'm hooked!
By the way, I'm absolutely convinced this person copied your story, word for word.
Onyx Flight Path
The title's similar too! Her's is called 'Literal Love Triangle'
Pssht. I hate it when people plagiarise.
Anyways, yeah.
I love your story so far, very creative idea :D
love,
SP.

O__O...OMG...
really now...no doubt this should be put in humor...
im laughing my ** off here...

it was so effin hot...

well, i`m still loving it...
i dont usually put comments but heck im reviewing every chapter...

i would love to clean up this chapter...though the mistakes weren`t that bothering, it would still be better to have them cleaned up...

heck...i would be screaming if i saw something like that...
and im not sure yet whether out of grossness or fangirl scream...
i can`t imagine the two gays yet...but still one thing i know...they`re hot while kissing...

I`m loving the lead girl...i just hope she won`t be whinny in the future...

OMG!That totally got me hooked. I hope the next chapters would keep me hooked.

In your email you told me to reply but i cant find your email adress anywhere. so i cant answer your questions. send me it so i can.

OMG she sounds like an ugly girl with low esteem and no soecial skills, and I DEFINETLY believe that she can be a yaoi fangirl, because everything points at that. It's rather the opposite kind of person that's unlikely to be a yaoi fangirl.

Very exciting story!