|Reviews for Jace Ain't No Playboy|
| HelloFasination 3/27/09 . chapter 1
heii i loved it it waz so cute
| x3life 4/27/08 . chapter 1
aw this was cute )
| Jevanminx 10/28/07 . chapter 1
So cute and clever. I liked.
| dOrKy-GuRl03 10/27/07 . chapter 1
aw..haah...a scheme huh to figure it out the truth about the person if they have feeling for you or not?..interesting..i like it...that was a good shot or a story...hope that you will write more...bye..bye...
| hiro0911 10/25/07 . chapter 1
Wow... it was... er.. VIVID
Overuse of the word 'fuck' (hehehe...) , but it was an entertaining read.
I was never good in One-Shots. I can't write one-page stories.
| Pop the Bubble 10/20/07 . chapter 1
that was awesome ]
i think the end was your strongest bit because the beginning - well just the last couple of lines in the first paragraph, could be a little more subtle, i think it was the anyway, "back to the story" bit. Maybe you could take that out and put something else, like make it a character flaw or something
i love this story! and i thought it was awesome! that was just that one bit that i thought was a little funny
hugs and kisses
| Altlover172 10/20/07 . chapter 1
It's cute! I like it!
| starlit x sky 10/20/07 . chapter 1
That was really cute!
I loved it, good job!