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Reviews For: Jace Ain't No Playboy

x3life
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseaw this was cute =)
Jevanminx
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseSo cute and clever. I liked.
JM
dOrKy-GuRl03
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseaw..haah...a scheme huh to figure it out the truth about the person if they have feeling for you or not?..interesting..i like it...that was a good shot or a story...hope that you will write more...bye..bye...
hiro0911
2007-10-25
ch 1,
abuseWow... it was... er.. VIVID

Overuse of the word '**' (hehehe...) , but it was an entertaining read.

I was never good in One-Shots. I can't write one-page stories.

Take care,

~hiro0911
Pop the Bubble
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abusethat was awesome =]
i think the end was your strongest bit because the beginning - well just the last couple of lines in the first paragraph, could be a little more subtle, i think it was the anyway, "back to the story" bit. Maybe you could take that out and put something else, like make it a character flaw or something
BUT
i love this story! and i thought it was awesome! that was just that one bit that i thought was a little funny
anyways
hugs and kisses
bubble
Altlover172
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseIt's cute! I like it!
starlit x sky
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseAw!
That was really cute!
I loved it, good job!
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