|Reviews for mondays and maybes|
| brandi alexandra 1/18/10 . chapter 1
I love this piece. It's just
He's with her, but you can't
let him go because you know
that YOU're the one that is
meant to be with him; not her.
I felt this too many times.
(My best friend was incredibly
stubborn and kept bouncing from
girl to girl, but he never
realized what was right in front
of him for years.)
| Kusuriuri 10/20/07 . chapter 1
| Andrea Lotte 10/20/07 . chapter 1
Ooh, I like this. I love the last line: mondays and maybes. It's got a lovely lilt to it. Anyway, the only real complaint I would have is the second-to-last verse. It doesn't sound as dreamy or poetic as the rest. The agitation is clear but perhaps you could make it slightly more lyrical, like the rest of it is? But other than that it's a really nice poem. Good job!