i thought your story was really good! So sad tho :-(, but i loved your character development of ivan.

I really like this, even though its sad. It's a very touching story, and you really only have to edit it alittle. The only other problem that might actually exist is that it's a bit rushed, but not enough to detract from the story. *thumbs up*

aw. sad and black. great read.

This is such a sad and sweet story! I think it would be a really great story to continue.

wow, thats..so deep, especially with the drugs and everything, i enjoy stories about vampires so this was awseeum :3

Wow, just wow! Not only do I love the name Jordan for a guy, but I love Vampires! Your writing is amazing, I know I've said this before but it really is. I was impressed by who you dug so well into the mind of a vampire and combined humanity with instinct. But Centi you pull at my heart. I loved the ending, well before I got to the last few paragraphs. I like how Jordan received his desire and then you twist it to make a curse. BRILLIANT!! Though I would have liked to see Ivan stay with Jordan...sequel maybe lol. I know writers hate that, anyway very good looking forward to more from you!!