I love the way so much music is woven into this. Music is such a big part of the lives of so many people. I liked the parts where you used the title of the song to finish a sentence, like 'he makes me feel like a (Supermassive Black Hole by Muse)'.

And Title and Registration is one of my favourite songs :)

Interesting effect in the freeverse. Nice use of emphasis.

I love the last 3 lines; they bring the poem to a nice close while mantainig its tone of honesty.

And kudos to you for putting The Con in there! I'm a HUGE TnS fan.

"Spelled out your name and lists the reasons
Faint of heart
Don't call me back"

OMFG! I HATE/LOVE YOU! THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING F*IN THING YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN! I now have new expectations out of you. All of them have to be this good. I can't even believe it. wow. wow. I love you hahaha