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| fairytale failure 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the way so much music is woven into this. Music is such a big part of the lives of so many people. I liked the parts where you used the title of the song to finish a sentence, like 'he makes me feel like a (Supermassive Black Hole by Muse)'. And Title and Registration is one of my favourite songs :) |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting effect in the freeverse. Nice use of emphasis. |
| never-written 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the last 3 lines; they bring the poem to a nice close while mantainig its tone of honesty. And kudos to you for putting The Con in there! I'm a HUGE TnS fan. "Spelled out your name and lists the reasons Faint of heart Don't call me back" |
| A little birdie once told m... 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseOMFG! I HATE/LOVE YOU! THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING F*IN THING YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN! I now have new expectations out of you. All of them have to be this good. I can't even believe it. wow. wow. I love you hahaha |