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CCPerson 2009-08-14 . chapter 1
I love it, with the whole nature thing.
young and the reckless 2009-05-10 . chapter 1
i love the headstrong attitude and the powerful message.
star blanket river child 2008-09-20 . chapter 1
I can never say this much in so few lines.

I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.
Anesther 2008-08-14 . chapter 1
For something disgusting, it was very well written.

Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.
outinarizona 2008-02-26 . chapter 1
aww... that's so nice.

I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.

"stealing from nature" -- now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?
tonight we storm 2008-01-02 . chapter 1
god you're good.
Doxology 2007-12-31 . chapter 1
again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)

peace and love

~> h.p. warble

p.s. yet another favorite...
Autumn Lace 2007-12-22 . chapter 1
I liked this poem too.
-Blood
Nemonus 2007-12-03 . chapter 1
Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air--fresh point of view.
gigglebug 2007-11-30 . chapter 1
wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.

I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!

thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!
Twilight Starr 2007-11-23 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Ecomsay 2007-11-13 . chapter 1
that was beautiful
little boy on her bike 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
wow, i just love that last line. brilliant...
Raiyune 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one.
Counting Petals 2007-10-28 . chapter 1
Or had he stolen something more?

I like it. =)
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