 CCPerson 2009-08-14 . chapter 1 I love it, with the whole nature thing. |
 young and the reckless 2009-05-10 . chapter 1i love the headstrong attitude and the powerful message. |
 star blanket river child 2008-09-20 . chapter 1I can never say this much in so few lines.
I bow down to you- you don't waste a word. |
 Anesther 2008-08-14 . chapter 1For something disgusting, it was very well written.
Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else. |
 outinarizona 2008-02-26 . chapter 1aww... that's so nice.
I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.
"stealing from nature" -- now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think? |
 tonight we storm 2008-01-02 . chapter 1god you're good. |
 Doxology 2007-12-31 . chapter 1again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)
peace and love
~> h.p. warble
p.s. yet another favorite... |
 Autumn Lace 2007-12-22 . chapter 1I liked this poem too.
-Blood |
 Nemonus 2007-12-03 . chapter 1Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air--fresh point of view. |
 gigglebug 2007-11-30 . chapter 1wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.
I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!
thanks for R&R-ing my haiku! |
 Twilight Starr 2007-11-23 . chapter 1Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)
~Twilight Starr~ |
 Ecomsay 2007-11-13 . chapter 1that was beautiful |
 little boy on her bike 2007-11-11 . chapter 1wow, i just love that last line. brilliant... |
 Raiyune 2007-11-11 . chapter 1I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one. |
 Counting Petals 2007-10-28 . chapter 1Or had he stolen something more?
I like it. =) |