I can never say this much in so few lines.

I bow down to you- you don't waste a word.

For something disgusting, it was very well written.

Nice, short, and a bit bitter. Doesn't need much else.

aww... that's so nice.

I love Magnolias; the best trees, really.

"stealing from nature" -- now that brings on a different perspective on the "let's pick a flower" impulse. makes you pause. really good insight into another person, don't you think?

god you're good.

again. this is absolutley wonderful. and i must say, the author's note is great as well :)

peace and love

~> h.p. warble

p.s. yet another favorite...

I liked this poem too.
-Blood

Very interesting theme. You could be more consice with the words "though,/because"; perhaps you could get rid of them. This poem is very unique and the ending, which was not at all what I expected, was like a breath of fresh air--fresh point of view.

wow. fantastic viewpoint with that one.

I can't think of anyone I know (personally, at least) that would think about someone stealing from nature right off the bat. fabulous!

thanks for R&R-ing my haiku!

Aww, that's so sad. Great poem. Very original. Nice work. :)

~Twilight Starr~

that was beautiful

wow, i just love that last line. brilliant...

I don't think it's disgusting... Heh. I think there's something about your writing... it's so simple and yet... I find it very moving... I liked this one.

Or had he stolen something more?

I like it. =)

I like this poem...

I really love this. It's so simple, yet it has so much to say. You used magnolias instead of roses. He gives a bouquet to you but you can't accept it because he took from someone else. Great job on this one...

-C.N