the stories were poorly thought out and thus badly written. spelling was bad and wordings were repetitive.

aaw, thats soo sad! and scary... I LOVE IT! Please write (or find) a story with vampires next!
GRtZ Silencia

I REALLY WANNA KNOW, WHO DID IT? Jackson is the only one with an exuse that isn't real, because they have a circular house and there are no corners in it, but...
Grtz Silencia

DANM YO THIIS STORY WAS ACTUALLY KINDA SCARY I NEVER ACTUALLY KNEW THAT RING AROUND THE ROSY WAS A DEATH SONG LOL GREAT STARY

Was it Jackson? Cause it's a circle house and he said he was sitting in the corner... I don't know.

nice story jane..
kinda crepy that amy kid [:
but... that song is lik.. FREAKKY now. im never gonan do taht dance again =/
hahhaha

omg i love this riddl i heard a nother version of it though but still

It was the Maid, in the dining room, with the Candle Stick! Fave all. :)

it was the maid, cos as far as I know, NO post on Sundays. V. freaky deaky. I almost wet my pants while reading the first one.

its a Sunday right?

so there's NO Bank, NO Post office... I'm not sure about the Grocery Stores 'cuz in other countries Grocery Stores are open even on Sundays I'm not sure about Washington, so... I'm suppose to say "the three of them" killed the girl but then again maybe I should check Washington first. hehe!

perhaps the three(3) of them killed the girl.

first of, the dead body was in the house, and the three of them have their own excuses but claimed not to see of hear anything.
but why did they do it?

ok, i give up. who did it?

This one totally made me turn my lights in the bedroom on!
I want to scream, AH!
Unfortunately, I have the same experience with her but not in a hiking cabin, I experienced it at a vigil house just a yaer ago... I actually thought she's one of those sisters who were assigned to stay there, but I was wrong... she's not even present to the living world!! Found it out the following morning.
Gives me goosebumps when I remember her and that experience!
-catherine_kate-

I never heard of this tale not until I read it today.
It was freaking scary, even having the thought of this song (I don't want to say the title) was a popular children's song.
Where ever you heard or read this story, it's just a freaking story to retell it here!
I does not only freaked me out, it also shocked me...

...to death.

-catherine_kate-

As usual Janies a genious!

Awesomely terrifying.
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