A short, but poignant, poem death's approach...

Nice. -laughs-

A concept of death that the character sees on her dream (or even right at that moment) It's a very nice haiku.


-C.N

Wow, I got a great mental picture when I read this. Lovely haiku. :) -faves-

-pb

approaching death...

nice...

I really like this haiku. I like the way it smoothly transitions from an abstract idea into concrete description. Keep up the good work!