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| berf 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abusei really enjoyed this piece. it shows a simple and true representation of the relationship between us and our "higher power" (to be more objective and not assume you're the same religion as i am). i liked the imagery. |
| loversdream17 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI like really like again your style and how you make it flow no matter if it doesn't rhyme or not. I so have problems doing that. Great job and I like your poem, but just curious what's the topic about? I mean what i get out of it could be and probaly is a whole lot differet? Great job. |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abusethis is a beautiful piece. i greatly enjoyed it. |