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| loversdream17 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat, Great.I really like. Another short but sweet one. I like that for me and many others have a hard time getting all you did in a about ten -15 line. The flow is real good and smooth. I really like how you ended it for its the perfect. |