Reviews for My Neverending Dream

Reviews For: My Neverending Dream

Seraphania 2008-08-11 ch 1,	abuseSo far I really like it; it's very original, and I like how you start with a dream. Good grammar and spelling is also a plus :D. The one thing I would suggest is to not explain what Selene is right way; it gives out too much and makes the story loses its mystery. I would advise you either take that bit out or change it, and let the readers figure out what is happening for themeselves. Don't worry, we're not that stupid. :3 Otherwise, a very fine job. Keep writing. ~Seraphania
grasping.for.sanity 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseawesome story! Your writing is amazing, things are detailed but not boring, although there is one part where the main character interacts with other secondary character that seems slightly awkward...it just doesn't flow as smoothly as the rest of your story, otherwise I thought your story was perfect! I'm really secretly hoping those dream demons find a way to come into the real world! or that she has to save the life of someone that saw her face
Un-Hidden Lotus 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! :D way better than anything i could try to ever do. like truly something said(sorry, cant remember your name :O), what happened in the part with the two redheaded girls? Anyway, all your description was awesome, and i like the storyline :]
Indefidalia 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseO_o Wow. WOW. I love your writing! It was very suspenseful and I enjoyed reading it immensely. I love how you protrayed Selene, and the concept of the Beacons and the Demons was interesting. I was confused a little bit in the middle where you describe why she likes school, but then you seemed to immediately skip from her going to school to those two redheads chasing her. What happened there at school? But forget my rambling... Excellent job! This is by far one of the most catching stories I've seen! Please, update when you have the time. ^^

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