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| NothingMoreNothingLess 2007-10-20 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the rhyming you've got going here, and I love the title. The only thing I saw is that this part (what more there is to me,/what more there is to be.) might need question marks. (unless that was intentional. -shrugs-) Over all, this was beautiful, and the last two lines were amazing. Cassandra |