I like the way you made the words flow together. This poem made me smile, the only thing I love more then writing or console games is sleeping. ^^

Ugh. Wtf. You're so #$@##% good at this. xD

Favorite part:

"When your mind just keeps on flying
And your curtains won't stay tied"

UGH. I love it. xD I love you. kbye.

-Sally

Nice poem, it gets a point across and it seems like it could easily be put to music. I like it. Good job.

+MOUSE

Simple, but almost pretty (and I mean that in a good way). I like the last two lines. I don't know what else I can say about it. It's really good though.

Cassandra

I love it! It's just.. wow. Never thought of it that way. ^^;