Jane doesn't sound like a mentally stable person. The way she flits from personality to personality makes me think that she has some sort of dissociative identity problem. But if Michael's okay with that, to each his own. XD Clearly, he has some control issues. I wonder how long their marriage will last before one of them cracks.

Great story, though. ;D

it's unique story. i like it.

are they even real?

This story has a very unique plot with a wonderful message. Thank you and keep up the great work.

I actually kinda liked it haha

this story isn't very polished - but somehow its perfect because of it. hmm..

This is the ... There are no words to describe how good this story is. OMG You are now my favorite author.

CAi CAi

YAY! I love it! They really aren't an ordinary couple! LOL

Oh wow. This was amazing! It felt so real, and it was incredibly well written.

Love,

Ivy