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| risaisis 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a great poem :) I don't really know what else to say, other than that I wish I could poetry write like that; unfortunately, my poetry sucks, lol. I really liked the line, "Turning fields into oceans of green, yellow and red". I'm sorry to hear this was based on a friendship. :( I've had a few relationships like that... I really hate backstabbers and traitors ;-; But I really like how you compared it to the season where everything begins to wither and die... Great job! :D -xx |
| VELVETxKISSES 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusewow... beautiful |
| Kizera 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was so...perfitul...-sniffles- Brava Brava |
| loversdream17 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseHey First Off Thanks for the review. I like this one very good. Short but sweet. I have had the same experience in friendship and in relationships. I like how you compared it to autumn. Thats keep up the great job. |