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| smilesforluck 2008-03-08 ch 19,  | abusei love it! please please please update soon! |
| FPBob 2008-03-02 ch 19, | abuseSuperb story. The love-hate relationship is mesmerising. I can't keep track of why Zahra is being mean to Blair or vice versa but I guess that is the point - there is no real reason for either of them to be mean to the other. I hope Bryan gets more than a broken nose. I guess only Piers (and not Bliar yet) knows it was him who Zahra lost her virginity to. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| auburnfusion 2008-03-02 ch 19, | abuseAw, this is really funny and romantic at the same time. You've taken this love-hate relationship to the extreme and followed with a little bit of a secret admirer. Yet, the plot seems very interesting and intriguing to follow, mostly because there's all these revenge elements thrown in. I can't wait to see what Zahra figures out about Blair... eventually. I can just imagine her sitting on her bed in her room going through piles and piles of Blair's dirty history. You've got something special here. Keep up the wicked awesome work -- I can't wait to read more, but take your time -- it's much more worthwhile waiting for it! Sincerely, Brooke//sugarsweet007 |
| The Datura Rose 2008-02-22 ch 19, | abuseSorry that I didn't review on the other chapters, I just started reading yesterday, and I really really like this story!I think that chapter 17 is my favorite part! hm... text messaging? I suppose that could work... anyways, please update soon! ~I8SN |
| midnightbeauty 2008-02-18 ch 19, | abuseAha, good chapter. Blair is just too cute! I just wanna give him a big hug! Hope you feel better :( Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| insanity-ward 2008-02-18 ch 19, | abuseomg! wicked awesome chapter!! luved it to death! i absolutely adore Zahra and Blair! they're just too cutee!! PLZ UPDATE SOON! =] |
| Roxanne Lilly Dubois 2008-02-18 ch 6, | abuseI liked it. =] |
| Roxanne Lilly Dubois 2008-02-18 ch 5, | abuseOh Baby! Very nice, haha. Keep up the good work! =] |
| Roxanne Lilly Dubois 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseHah, nice. I like where this is going, it could still be a lot longer though. |
| Roxanne Lilly Dubois 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it, bit short though. =\ |
| SummerBaby94 2008-02-18 ch 19, | abuseWith Blair and Zahra it's always one step forward and two steps back. :( I like how the notes are going though. |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-02-18 ch 19, | abuseGreat chapter, I wonder if she figures out who it is after asking about the instruments...maybe, maybe not...Update!! :D |
| midnightbeauty 2008-02-13 ch 18, | abuseI feel so bad for Zahra :( That would suck. Why'd she sleep with Bryan in the first place? He's a butt face ass bag **wrinkles nose** Update soon! I should go before the power goes out again XD Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-02-13 ch 18, | abuseWow, they kissed again! When I read the chapter title I was lie, 'Yayy, they're going to kiss again!!' Well great chapter, update soon! :D |
| SummerBaby94 2008-02-13 ch 18, | abuseAW! I like how Blair stood up for Zahra. It just kinda sucks that she doesn't want to be friends, or anything else with him. |