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| Anjirika 2008-07-25 ch 23,  | abuseThe beginning of this chapter was great, the princess heavyness was a nice added touch and the Queen while being a bit of a stuck up snob is quite realistically portrayed/written. Update soon please! (Oh, I hate Bastien now and I want Cece/Eirian to remember, she's so close!) |
| XX-HEART 2008-07-20 ch 22, anon. | abuseOMG this is so far the best retelling of Beauty and the Beast I have ever read in FictionPress. No kidd cause I've read a lot of Beauty and the Beast retelling. Your story is so original with the incestuos relationship of the beast and his niece and a blind Beauty. I feel so sad for the Beast though the he loved Eirin but she doesn't even remeber him and he might also lose her to his own son (if Bastien is his son) update soon and keep writing beautifully |
| Celestial Songbird 2008-07-20 ch 22, | abuseHi, I've been following this story for a bit and I wanted to tell you how much I love it and look forward to your updates. I love fairytales in general and Beauty and the Beast is my all-time favorite, so I'm really glad you chose to write about this one. I love how original you made it with a heroine like Cece and rather than having a totally obnoxious Gaston-type character in the triangle, you chose to make him nicer and more protective of her (like Raoul in Phantom of the Opera). I like the different personalities of the princesses and I hope to see a bit more of them. Can't wait for the next update!~Songbird |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-07-19 ch 22, | abuseHello. Is the story near its ending? Just curious. =) Good chapter. Good pacing. =D |
| Chris Rhyanne 2008-07-18 ch 22, | abuseAww... I sure hope nobody does anything drastic. But good chapter, and sorry, I usually only comment once every three chapters or so. So... uh... Keep writing! |
| Anjirika 2008-07-17 ch 22, | abuseAck! Ack! Ack! No! No! No! Cece doesn't love Bastien! She loves the Beast! Update soon! Update soon please! |
| caramellxkissx 2008-07-14 ch 11, | abusewait, if beast and eriran fall in love, what happens to Imogene? |
| caramellxkissx 2008-07-14 ch 4, | abusethe end: cute |
| caramellxkissx 2008-07-14 ch 3, | abusethat was really good! you are so original, i love this story! |
| Anjirika 2008-07-14 ch 21, | abuseOh dear, oh dear, oh dear... I hope Cece regains her memory soon, and before the curse runs out... And I hope you have a fun time on your trip even though that means two weeks without an update... So please, updated ASAP! |
| Chris Rhyanne 2008-07-08 ch 20, | abuse-whew- I just finished the entire thing in half an hour. And now my eyes hurt, so I have to write fast before I go blind from staring at the computer screen... So, I really like it. I never liked the original 'Beauty and the Beast'. Way too simple, happy-ending story. But, I really like this retell. It's very well written, and I'm hoping you update quickly. Or else... -evil laugh- |
| Lionesscouer 2008-07-08 ch 20, | abusewhat?? no (stomping feet on the ground!) Now what's going to happen to the beast.. if she doesn't remember anything.. but YAY to the updates!! i've missed reading this |
| Anjirika 2008-07-08 ch 20, | abuseSo she was out of it for almost a year? Or she's been gone for almost a year? I hope the questions will be answered in the next chapter... |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2008-06-26 ch 19, | abuseWell, your feeling is right on the spot! HOW COULD YOU!! HOW COULD YOU MAKE EIRIAN GO! WHY! Ok, enough of drama-me. This chapter is AWESOME! Update soon! Can;t wait to see what happens. |
| Anjirika 2008-06-26 ch 19, | abuseGood. So good. Update soon please! |