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| Lerene 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI curious why her parents wanted her to act shy and all. Interesting story. |
| missCeilidh 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abusemeh, not exactally my type of story, but maybe if you continued the story line, about how the school reacts or something it could end up good, or maybe tell us more about why she's supposed to stay timid and shy, and who these people actually are. like names, or something. sorry, i'm getting a little carried away, but it's a good begining, keep wrighting. miss C. |
| caralene 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty interesting, no going around in circles... Nice.. |
| Misty 2007-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseAhaha, this "sucky" thing was so funny, it made my day. Hehehe. I wish there cud be more to this though. Still funny though. Hope u get over ur writer's block. |
| Sakura5584 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuselol...i think it's pretty funny...and straight forward! it's a better alternative then the constant problematic plots... :) |