Reviews for I do believe in Soul Mates

Reviews For: I do believe in Soul Mates

Lizzy231 2008-07-04 ch 1,	abuseWow.
Lily Llynn 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseWell look what somebody finally put back up. XD I'm sure I reviewed this before, and I really really wanna see all those old stories again! Please edit them quickly. (: Especially looking forward to "The day I threw my shoe through the Window" and "Go Fish." (wink wink nudge nudge) XD Oh and this was awesome, of course. Fluffy but awesome. (:
gulistanlik 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! That was so sweet! Nice idea to test things like this in such a touchy and tragic situation! You did it really well. gulistanlik
chocolaterain 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseTHAT'S SO SWEET!
tara 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseomg! this is wonderful! it's the second story i've read sry... i started with troubleand didn't say anything about it but this is good! =D
A Healing Heart 2007-12-17 ch 1,	abuseI can't send PMs anymore. Could you go on my profile and message me from my email? I liked this by the way. Way cool.
Jayjack 2007-10-28 ch 1,	abusejesus i thought he died.
MzKit10 2007-10-22 ch 1,	abusei started reading "this is familiar" and then it clicked "hey! i remember this!" I still love it just as much as the first time i read it. the line "Gaëlle made a little happy noise and for the sake of hearing it all over again, he went all mock-puzzled “Who is he?”" is cute and, while i may not be american or any of that kind of thing, i think you did well with dealing seriously with the situation. Good stuff! Kat.
jlr 2007-10-21 ch 1,	abuseI think this story might be set better over a car accident or something similar. If you don't like writing "angsty crap" then setting something in New York on September 11th is probably not the best decision. That being said, if you did want to keep the setting the same, the dialogue is . . . I guess "off" would be the right word. I don't mean to insult you in any way, but I am pretty sure that you weren't that close, so I am just going to put out a few things that you might want to know if you want to keep this setting. We were scared. Terrified. We didn't have time to be sad right then. We were. But we were scared first. And you have to know that we didn't know they were terrorists then. When the first building was hit for sure. After, it could have been anything, maybe we were at war. And cell phones didn't work. One of the major cell hubs was in the base of the towers so most people didn't have cell reception. I know that Gaelle doesn't answer that question, but that might be helpful. I am also not sure about where Jacqueline and Gaelle live (I know it isn't that important) but if they lived in Manhattan driving was a complete disaster that day and the only other place I can peg for them to live is Brooklyn. So, I am just not sure about the deliveries he was taking but I think the details there need to ironed out. I think that this could be a really good short story. I hope that you consider what I said and know that I am trying to help, not be mean.
Pop the Bubble 2007-10-21 ch 1,	abuseYOU'RE PUTTING THEM ALL UP NOW! YAYY! AND I GOT THE REVIEW VIRGINITY!! yesh am i awesome or what? yes 13 is lucky. in chinese it is anyways :P

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