|Reviews for Legalised Robbery|
| Gemma Lovell 11/26/07 . chapter 1
Ooh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!
| Twilight Starr 11/3/07 . chapter 1
Great poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.
| i am valentine 10/27/07 . chapter 1
i liked this, and you rhyme really well