Ooh, I really like this! Sorry it took me so long to review, by the way. I like how you used informal language. Your rhyme scheme reminded me a bit of that poem "Macavity the Mystery Cat" by T.S. Elliot, which is pretty cool. Your English is still doing really well. Great job!

Love, Gemma

Great poem. It was sort of funny even though these days it's kind of true.

Twilight Starr

i liked this, and you rhyme really well