[in the merry-go-round laughter after dusk.]
Beautiful line.

Nice, carefree tone at the beginning, which faded away to depression towards the end. The way you connected the names in the sky was nice, too, giving this a feeling of unity.

The first line was a bit confusing. I almost thought it was the title at first.

Lovely work as always.

i can relate.
it`s sad how things can die so suddenly.

this is just amazing.

Wow, it's amazing that dreamers and romantics still exist on this website; even more so amazing that they still exist in this day and age. This was simple, sweet, cute, pretty, soft, beautiful. Loved the last verse. Thank you for this.

"signature in the sky"--beautiful way of putting it...and so poignant; so hard it is took look up one night and not see it anymore, and the words run though your head "it's the same sky we're looking at"

This is really poignant, I love the imagery. Well done.

This is a beautiful poem! I really enjoy the last verse in particular, the lines are haunting and reflect feelings I only know too well. You're a very talented writer.

brilliant :) on to faves

nicely done. i love your style.

Woah, I'm used to reading longer but this really stuck out to me. I felt like I could connect with this, sounds stupid but I know exactly what you mean in this, really nice job.

Sweet and gloomly. Makes you think of what was and what might have been.

omg.. i love it

Sabes

konban wa

*adds to favs*

"in the space between the stars / where we wrote our names."

"i can't find out signature in the sky."

This was absolutely beautiful. I loved everything about this poem. :D

Zaijen
-Shan-

Very cute and quite refreshing to read. I love, love the last line, it adds quite a touch to the poem itself. Great job and keep writing.

-C.N

writing names in the stars is love
really.

"in the merry-go-round laughter after dusk" - beautiful. i love the line straight after it, gives a picture of well, time just after dusk as you hold hands and laugh and stare at the sky.
this is definitely going into my favourites.