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| Jeannie-Redd 2007-10-22 ch 1,  | abuseDark but I like it. I like how it's simplicity conveys so much raw emotion. Good job and write more. ~Jeannie-Redd |
| sylvia's syndrome 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting piece. It's nice and dark but I think it borders on the melodramatic. I do like the effect of the pithy, simple statments that make up the majority of the lines. They reinforce the feelings of anger. Keep writing! |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseinteresting how emotions can be drawn out of us even through something as impersonal as a telephone receiver. Nice flow. Good ideas. I hope you're okay |