I like this. It has that creepy hospital aura about it. I looke dup what osteomyelitis is, and it's a bone infection. Did... You really have this? If so, that must've been horrible. I hate the hospital myself. It's been eight years...

Anyway, I liek your essay, though for what, I'm not sure. Anyway, good luck on your paper, you deserve an 'A'!

I'm not really sure what the intent of this is, but the detail could not be better :)

~Deanna xD