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| girls will be boys 2008-05-18 ch 1,  | abusethe first line seems so harsh & raw (and i ADORE that.) i loved the title & i like the poem. (it's not th soft kind of poem but so blunt and out in your face.) :) |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI like the format and the descriptions... what I really loved was the phrase you couldn't care more.. interesting twist.. great job |
| Camilleta 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abusePerfect. ^^ |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was good, but there are a little too much bolding and italicized bits. It--kind of, sort of--makes them less dramatic, if you get what I mean. Other than that, it was wonderful. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem. Nice job! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |